Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
• Explain the problem
• Suggest a solution
• Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with respect to the requisition for a parking facility for our office building.
Due to the lack of parking space most of the employees who drives to office by their own vehicles are parking in front of the banyan tree which is next to our campus. After our office hours it becomes more difficult for everyone to drive out their cars or bikes suddenly from there due to congestion and at times the droppings of the birds pollute our vehicles which produces foul smell especially during rainy season.
It would be grateful if there is some place allocated for our employees near the newly built water falls so that the heavy traffic and tension could be avoided.
Crashing of vehicles shall be avoided if a separate space is given and employers could also be benefited by cutting down a part of salary from employees pay scale.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you
Yours Sincerely,
Teena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93373493976 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34909636623 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7871606434 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138210839773 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644457488547 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562953246531 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608064012369 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574925323759 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.