A letter to a company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings, and you want to help for it.
In your letter, you should:
when you could start
what you could do
why you want to help.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to lend my helping hand in renovating school buildings, which I came to know after reading the advertisement your company posted in “The Hindu” newspaper.
Currently I am working as a free lancer and I have few years of work experience in interior design techniques. Mostly, I will be free in the evening times and would like to help you, as doing this sort of petty works will enhance my skills to next level as well gives me an opportunity to explore myself among others.
We are a team of six young professionals who will work for extra miles and could able to repaint the entire block with the ultra-modern paints. In addition, we can look after your accounts as well replace the old cupboards with fashionable ones.
By this weekend I am available, and It would be great if you could provide us chance to serve you.
Looking for a positive revert.
Yours faithfully,
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: FREE_LANCER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
...ewspaper. Currently I am working as a free lancer and I have few years of work experience...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77300613497 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69988840844 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711656441718 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0574693147 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240447897311 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891969776518 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685997627224 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124824583307 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597719249003 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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