Music should not be taught in schools instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In today’s fast-pacing world, where enormous importance is given to academic subjects such as science and computers. As a result, certain section of the society believes that other arts like music is obsolete and has no value and should be removed from the subjects whereas others support the idea of including music. In my opinion, I strenuously agree to insert such a noble profession into schools.
To begin with, music is considered as one of the finest form of arts as it plays a major role in child’s creativity, boosts up their confidence levels and reduce stress in academics. Secondly, teaching music in schools helps students to explore their new talents and in turn, it enables them to stand highly successful in their future converting as the breakdowns as breakthroughs. An apt illustration is Indian contemporary music composer A.R.Rehman where he was a violinist at his primary school levels and was given a wide opportunity to indulge himself in all competitions supported by his own tutors. Finally, to have an optimum child’s mental growth, it is recommended by phycologists in any kind of arts. For instance, a recent study in NPI – Europe revealed that kids who practiced any sort of arts at their elementary levels are free from isolation and anxiety.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that we must not exclude science and computers from our subjects as it predominantly plays a significant role in shaping one’s career path. However, it does not mean to ignore music based on the above fact.
To conclude, to foster a child’s growth in plethora of fields, I strongly reckon that music should become part and parcel of the student’s academics for them to reach the pinnacle and enhance nation’s laurels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rehman
... Indian contemporary music composer A.R.Rehman where he was a violinist at his primary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99789065757 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2333084071 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179530915103 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609319369336 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554193937215 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110785652002 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745779651337 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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