Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to old people while others think that people should save money for their future life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
people have different views about whether the government should have policies to support the old. Although some argue that people need to save their own money, I believe that the government ought to provide financial aid and care for the old generation.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should provide the old with financial assistance and care. First, since the elderly have spent most of their lives contributing to the society and paying taxes to the government, they deserve a piece of the national budget. For example, some countries in the Euro are supporting the old about financial aid and health care, which helps them have a better life. second, the government needs to support the old in terms of financial aid and care to ensure fairness for themselves and society as a whole. In fact, the large number of senior citizens do not have the ability to work due to declining physical and mental conditions.
On the other hand, saving money brings some benefits to the old and the society. Firstly, if old citizens have enough money to pay for their basic needs, the government fund will be spent on other crucial fields such as the health care system, education, and national defense. Thay way, standards of living would be enhanced in other aspects of life. second, when the old suffer from a disease, they need money to cover healthcare services. As a result, their saving helps them do this without support from their offspring and grandchildren.
In conclusion, while it is partly true that the elderly need to save their own money in some cases, I still support the view that the government needs to help the old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44303269343 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512280701754 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.156792024 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360293289077 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133451588141 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886929723385 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248848106054 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895177163853 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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