Computes ard increasingly popular thes days many people think that the advantages that the computers have brought over weigh the disadvantages what is your opinion?
The benefits of the popularity of the computers nowdays more as compared to its drawbacks. This essay agree that having computers as a global demand brings more advantageous than its disadvantageous .The merit of this development is easy do work at offices and schools whereas it has one demerit is that many health hassel put adverse impact on humanbeings if they use more time a compute in their life but it can solve by peopel make a routine to less time spend on it.
The main advantage use of a computer as a electronic gadgets which helps people do work easily accurately and effectively at offices and schools. To explain it more, if a masses use computer so it can helpful pupil's enrich knowledge of world by single touch of button. As a result, various opportunities are open for those who are doing the jobs in Google and YouTube offices as these places an enhance the income of individuals. For instance, the oxford university conducted a survey and found that 72% of professionals save time at workplaces because o computers.
However, the disadvantages of computers world wide is that many detrimental diseases are adverse impact on mankind. To sy it more, computers is used in every nook corner of the world so people over- reliance on computers than others activities but problem can be solved if people make a schedule to less time spend on computer and taking a break just 5-10 minutes while use of computer. As an instance, the report was published by the times of Newyork said that because of utilized of computers as the demand is the main reason of increasing diseases into human life but that also suggest that it can be solved by maintain time limit for using computer.
To conclude, from my perspective no doubt computers have merits and demerits but in the cut- throat time the advantageous of computer is higher tan demerits because it required at every place on the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78484848485 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7381282273 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3967591985 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.9 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22818717325 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982054336141 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059739012367 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144940264006 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406110709849 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.