With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste.The money could be better spent on other causes.
Nations after nations, every day, every year, celebrates its achievements in space exploration.However, it is now the time to question how meaningful these blasts are.This essay aims to explain why it is questionable.
First, until all urgent and important matters of the globe have been solved, money bumped on space exploration is meaningless.It is not a common sense at all to invest millions of dollars researching and producing foods for astronauts (for space exploration purpose), while every day thousands of people are starving.Furthermore, the discovery of outer space only serves a minor group of people if the majority are even not well-educated.Those in rural areas or third-world nations do no even know how to prevent common threatening diseases such as AIDS and lung cancer.
Then, some may argue that the purpose of space exploration are to discover new lands, new energy resources or to deter potential threat to globe.Nevertheless, is it effective to do so while other alternatives are available?Lands on earth are no yet effectively used.New energy resources (e.g. solar and nuclear energy) have not yet been widely-used.Threats of plagues have not yet been deterred.All of these tasks that haven’t been tackled yet require money.That is why costly space discovery programs are a waste of resources.
In a nutshell, people should only invest in space exploration provided that urgent and important matters mentioned earlier in this essay have been solved.Also, purposes of space exploration campaigns should be studied carefully and other alternatives should be considered before the money is wasted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, third, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8625 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.96345940015 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.752059294 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 351.75 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 20.7667163134 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173285999281 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101102997527 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593144865432 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101102997527 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593144865432 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.34 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.1 11.3001002004 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.6 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.61 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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