it is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
History refers to everything that happened in the past especially politically, economically and socially. Everything including nation, state,town or product have its own unique history. Some people argue that children should only be taught the local history, while others believe that the global history is more supremew. From my prespective, knowledge about the local and international history are equally beneficial for students.
On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that students must have knowledge about the national and local history of the area. There are multifarious benefits of leaning local history. First of all, it helps us to comprehend the contribution and the sacrifies our ancestors made in order to give us the free land where we live today. It tells ur the progress of civilization and stories of wars and victories. Secondly,it creates respect of our country and enhances our nationality. To illustatre, when we read about great freedom fight lead by Gandhji, it makes us patriotic. Lastly, it helps the puplis to stay connected to their root, and respect local culture and customs. This leads to the preservation of tradition.
On the other side, having idea of major international historic events is also necessary. Firstly, one must have knowledge of important historic phenomenon such as World War One And World War Two becauses it has reframed todays society.Firstly, with the advancment of technology, Earth has became a small global village. So one must have adequate knowledge about world history as it helps us to understand relationship between two countrys. Secondly, it broadens the children horizon of understanding different culture and accept cultural diversity. Moreover, there are fair chances that they might migrate to other country for higher education, job oppurtunities or for fmaily settlement. Having an idea about international history will make them easily accepted by local inhabitants.
To conclude, school curicullum should include both local and international history, inorder to make a world better place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48909657321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00093960823 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5621464901 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21444446683 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621207440441 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055115845927 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132698015319 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390996595522 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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