Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. how would you use this land. Use specific details to explain your answer.
Still it is not found life on other planet; the only earth has that type of environment where human and other animal has live. So the value of land or earth is unpredictable. If I received some land for use of my wish, I would like to establish a business firm or a manufacturing company, because it beneficial for me as well as the surrounding people's. In following essay I will explain the benefits of my opinion.
Firstly, everyone has their dreams and they are always tried to complete his dream. I have also my dream, “To be a successful Business Man”. When anyone try to establish his own company he need a land and we all know the prices of land is very high. The cost of the land is almost the amount of whole business equipment's. If I received a land, it saves my half of money that I would invest in my business. When any business run successfully then owner gets a lot of money from it and from that money he can fulfill his other dream. In my case I have a lots of goal in my life and for that I required a lots of money and hence the business is the best way to earn a lots of money within a time limit.
Secondly, any kind of company working on the basis of machinery and workers, when I establish company, then I have a requirement of employees. I can mostly choose employee who’s live nearby my company so, I get more employee in less pay-scale and the people's are get employment. It also helps them to improve their living style; also some people's are inspires from me and start their new business. The company is depends on other company so it has better chance to other people start their own company, and fulfill their dreams.
In conclusion, I would like to develop a new business on land that I can receive. It completes my dream as well as goals which has fewer chances to complete without money. When business runs successfully I got more money and I can easily fulfill my goals. It also helpful to near-by living people's as they get jobs. They has also chance to start their own business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cessful Business Man'. When anyone try to establish his own company he need a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39153439153 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52032414932 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457671957672 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7373819972 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105597582398 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377296482391 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516190856047 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732347273007 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574287438044 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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