You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.

Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter

• explain your situation

• describe the problems

• say what you would like to happen

Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.

Submitted by WTaran on Fri, 01/03/2020 - 05:56

Dear sir ,

I am writing this letter regarding a computer ,which is related with the Lg company and purchased by me from your local computer store.

Actually, you send a machanic at my home to fix a computer ,but when i started to use it,at that time i noticed all the wires were loose and some wires are giving sparkle due to the looseness. So i am not staisfy with your service.

Now,i requested you to please a pefessional machanic will be send by you,becase i wiil not want to suffered with this problem again.wire sparking is a very big issue for new gadget.also, i have consumed huge amount to purchase on it.definately, you understand my problem and try to solve it and please it would be better if you change all wires and pots.

I hope, you wold solve my problem very soon .

Your's faithfully,

Taran

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear sir , I am writing this letter regarding a ...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...writing this letter regarding a computer ,which is related with the Lg company and...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a machanic at my home to fix a computer ,but when i started to use it,at that tim...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at my home to fix a computer ,but when i started to use it,at that time i notice...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...a computer ,but when i started to use it,at that time i noticed all the wires were ...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t when i started to use it,at that time i noticed all the wires were loose and so...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...giving sparkle due to the looseness. So i am not staisfy with your service. Now...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... am not staisfy with your service. Now,i requested you to please a pefessional m...
^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...am not staisfy with your service. Now,i requested you to please a pefessional m...
^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , becase
...pefessional machanic will be send by you,becase i wiil not want to suffered with this p...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ope, you wold solve my problem very soon . Yours faithfully, Taran
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57823129252 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64148319112 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.173242282 44.8134815571 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240010618523 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974552610193 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810326351843 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137884856433 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712627115297 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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