Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.
it is no doubt that young people often learn or imitate actions from entertainments like movies or television programs, that these media are influential to them. To a large extent, I disagree with the statement that the disadvantages outnumbers the positive effects. With the right choice of content, movies and television can be advantageous to young people.
The first advantage is that movie and television can be educational, tv programs often teaches life lesson like telling us to cherish out family, like the show 'this is us', uses family relationship as the main concpet, giving quotes like 'life is short', 'when life gives you lemon, turn it to lemonade', giving positive thinking to face life difficulties. Moreover, 'Black Mirror' on Netflix brings reflection on social issues like over reliance on technologies, anti-discrimintaion, pointing out the problems we are facing in the society, and let the audiance to think about it. All these can have positive effect on youth's behavior.
The second advantage is that these entertainment relieve pressure from life. young people receive a lot of pressure from school work, some people have unusual behavior under great pressure, they may be easily anger or overly depressed, having a temporal escapse from reality can help them lossen the string.
Thirdly, it can be inspirational, movies we seen on screen at cinemas are often mass production that require a lot of work from different peopl, from script writing, directing, editing, to filming. some young children are facinated and interested in this industries, willing to pay alot of hard work to fullfill the dream in making a movie. A friend of mine was inspired by Christopher Nolan, the director of a number of famous movie, like the 'Batman' triology and the 'Inception', he even bought a DVD to study different scene and other details of the movie.
To sum up, movie and televisions can be educational, act as a media to relax and be inspirtaional, and i think these advantages bring more positive effect on young children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, thirdly, i think, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15269461078 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91818346884 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595808383234 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3894671855 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202805679262 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860520506247 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811497810581 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124750139032 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875000177431 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.