Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
Obesity can be described as the condition in which a person has an increased amount of body weight in accordance with his height and age. In the contemporary world of advanced technology, obesity is a burgeoning problem. This essay shall devel into the widespread causes of obesity and practically possible remedies to alleviate it.
The primary reason for obesity is junk food and unhealthy eating habits. Junk food is slowly eating away the health of today's people; the name itself suggests how harmful it is for our body. To commence with, people are attracted to junk food, which is rich in carbohydrate, fat, cholesterol, sugar, salt and added preservatives. Given the choice of steamed vegetable vs pizza; salads vs chips; or fruit vs candy , most of the people will prefer the latter, simply because they are very appealing to our tongue. Also, the mushrooming growth of fast food outlets have made it easily available and affordable. By contrast, healthy food is costly and not easily food. To add to it, our minds our bombarded with advertisements and offers like buy 1 get 1 free or 30% off.
The second main reason for the prevalence of obesity is sedentary lifestyle due to fast paced world. With work commitments of 14hours a day, insecurities, target based compensation, cut throat competition, hire and fire culture and excessive availablity of employees, people are glued to office desk. Consequently, their health is affected due to no physical activities. It is apt to mention here that materialism in the capitalist world is making man unhealthy. Moreover, both adults and children are stick to screen whether it be television, smartphones, i-pads, or computer. As a result of which we have become couch potatoes.
Last and most important people do not have the idea that obesity is not just one disease but a constellation of diseases that brings diabetes, hypertension and cardiovascular problems with it.
A lot of measures can be taken by the individual themselves and the government to overcome this epidemic. Firstly, people should remember if time is money then health is wealth. People should change their attitude todays health and adopt a healthy lifestlye, which include well-balanced diet and physical activities. As far as the government is concerned, it should stop focussing on Gross National Product Index and shift its attention towards Gross National Happiness Index, which include sustainable development, health and happiness, education and environmental protection. In addtion to this, sports club and well equipped gym in propriqunity of residential arear should be made. Moreover, with the help of media, spread awareness of the importance of exercise and proper diet. Also, make stringent law against the use of harmful preservatives in packed food items and sweeping taxes on junk food to reduce its intake
To conclude, the joint efforts of the people and the government will help us to win the war against the deterioting health of the nation.
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| 2020-01-04 | Richa.mahajan | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 9, column 579, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sion, smartphones, i-pads, or computer. As a result of which we have become couch ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21443298969 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94014490548 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59175257732 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 774.0 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6272950273 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2083333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117699653828 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331991149498 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571240416983 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529976353192 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389306131045 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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