Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazine or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?
The trend to copy famous people is common among ordinary people as they often watch them on a daily basis through Television and or general magazines. This essay will discuss why this is happening and provide evidence as to why replicate such personalities is not a lucrative idea.
Let us start with reasons why normal people try to copy famous personalities. Firstly, it is generally believed that companies give preference to hiring famous people to promote their products, as a result, they earned a hefty amount and live luxury life. Therefore, the general public tries to replicate them to gain popularity in the same way, so they could be offered a job with a handsome income to up light their standard of living. Finally, it has been pointed out that media pay huge attention to public figures to increase channels rating because of their fame, and this creates a desire among common people to become famous like them. Therefore, to fulfill the dream of media coverage is another factor that influences ordinary people to replicate famous personalities.
Although this trend to copying famous people is common among people. However, people need to put effort and explore their potential to live with originality rather than copying others to gain fame. A recent article suggests that 60% of people got failed in the film industry because they were not good at acting and dancing. However, they did join this profession by copying others rather than exploring their original potential. In addition to that, a person would be able to get permanent happiness if he will spend life in his own-way, and this will help him to become confident to deal with real challenges in life
In conclusion, although replicating to famous people gives short-term benefits to ordinary people, I believe they should explore their original talent to get permanent happiness than coping famous personalities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nt and live luxury life. Therefore, the general public tries to replicate them to gain popular...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to replicate famous personalities. Although this trend to copying famous people is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12179487179 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62551457027 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.173885829 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342580319817 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150148401386 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806706168395 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231268994327 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537627352441 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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