You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should:
– Say what you enjoyed about the dinner
– Describe how you feel about his/her family
– Invite your friend and his/her family to your place.
Dear James,
It was nice to meet you and your family yesterday. I'm writing to say thank you for inviting me to your place for dinner.
With regard to dinner, it was so delicious, especially the beetroot salad, which your mother prepared for me. As you know, how much I love homemade food and I was overwhelmed to have all my favourite dishes on the food menu. The chia pudding served by your sister at the end was a cherry on the cake. Please say my special thanks to her and your mom for cooking all those lip-smacking dishes.
As far as the meeting with your family is concerned, it was a quality of time, which I spent with them. I really like their hospitality and kindness. You are so lucky to have parents with such a loving nature and your younger sister, Alia, she is so adorable. She is such a chatterbox that I don't think anyone would need a TV when she is around. Say hello to her.
As you know, my younger brother Joe's birthday is falling next week and we are organizing a surprise brithday party for him. It'd be an honour to have you and your family to be a part of this celebration. Your presence would mean a lot to us and it'd be a wonderful opportunity for our parents also to meet each other.
I look forward to seeing you. Please convey my regard to your parents.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3967611336 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36618116167 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.958655913 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8823529412 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325524671764 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105761370046 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736131380463 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210040226531 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781590702926 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.