You forget your bag in the gym and gym management announced that the gym will be closed for a week for some renovation work. You need your bag as it has important things in it. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe your position
give them a description of your bag
tell them what you want them to do
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to inform you that unfortunately yesterday I forgot to collect my bag from the gym’s locker room.
My name is Jacob Carlos and I am a member of your fitness center since past 2 years. Although I had read the notice on the notice board regarding the closure of the gym between 12-Jan to 19-Jan, I request you to search for it and update me so that I can collect the same as it has many items which are important for me both personally and professionally.
Let me explain it to you in detail. I was training in the gym yesterday evening when and important call from my home caught my attention and in hurry I completely forgot to collect my bag. The bag is navy blue in colour with brand name American Tourister embossed in the front. Apart from this it has 2 compartments and a side pouch with my water bottle in it. The bag contains few important office papers and a brand new mobile phone which I have recently purchased for my dad’s 50th birthday. Since my dad’s birthday is day after tomorrow and because I want him to gift him the present on his birthday, I request you to help me find the bag as soon as possible.
Could you please contact on my mobile number which is registered with the gym so that I could come over and collect the bag? I would be extremely grateful to you, if you do this favour on me.
Hope you will consider my request and do the needful.
Thanks and regards,
Jacob Carlos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51291512915 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50633108561 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4550962953 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241549045782 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812818848756 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047136067606 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147406447942 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039700410232 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.