You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-
* Describe the work you have been doing
* Explain why you can no longer do this work
* Recommend another person who is interested in this work
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am John Smith, and I have been a volunteer at Redmond Wellness Center for the past six months. While I find the work fulfilling, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to continue it after the end of this month.
I have been working mostly in the rehabilitation department. My duties include helping to set up the equipment for physiotherapy, helping patients with dementia, and organizing events for elderly patients. Additionally, I also help with record-keeping whenever required. I have decided to move to Boston to complete the last year of my graduation, so I am unable to continue with the volunteer work.
My friend, Mary, who is a nursing student, is interested in taking up the role. I am confident that she's capable of handling the duties well. Also, she is studying computers so she might be able to help with the technical aspects as well. I am attaching her resume for your reference.
I hope to hear back from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-* Describe the work you have b 81
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-* Describe the work you have b 78
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this? 56
- Many wear like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing? 67
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is best both for the individual and for society Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...aking up the role. I am confident that shes capable of handling the duties well. Al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82954545455 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89125837656 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6374333462 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234231728494 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807139740921 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752239853354 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132355992974 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684860694464 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.