You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
• explain why you want to take time off work
• give details of the amount of time you need
• suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr Hassan,
I am writing to let you know that I am very grateful to work for you in your organisation. And I will be in your debt forever. However, as you may know that I am in the end of my final semester at trinity college, I will need to spend more time studying for the exams which starts next week. I would like to request you to approve my annual leave which I applied 2 months ago.
I have four exams and one science related thesis to complete which will take place in my college over the next few weeks. Hence, I will need approximately 1 month of leave. And after I graduate, I will be qualified for other senior positions in your organisation. This will also allow me to grow in my field.
I also understand that we have a lot of deadlines this quarter, however, once I am through with my exams, my main priority will be to complete all the tasks at work. Moreover, I have my colleague, Raj, who also is qualified to do the same work as mine, will help to complete the deadlines when I am away.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Anil
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- You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter• explain why you want to take time off work• give details of the amount of time you need• sugge 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36097560976 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46813843151 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.124770285 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215249528429 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858246614895 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622269848146 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127238260863 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848980313167 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.