youth nowadays are involved in many crimes. what are the causes of this? in your opinion, how can we reduce youth crime rate?
There are growing concerns with youngsters committing crime. Many factors should be taken into account; most of them are related to lack of education and by the movies and online shows that they watch on television, however, by increasing parents supervision on children, crime rate can be controlled.
It is often said that education plays a very important role in a persons life. Without it, they will not have a purpose in life. Many youngsters stop going to schools. Reasons for this could be either due unvailability of money to pay tuition fees or they may have more reponsibility such as looking after their siblings. Because of this, they may not fulfill the requirement to get a good job. Hence, teenagers end up working at places that allow them to commit crimes. Additionally, many tv channels are now broadcasting movies or serials that show celebrities commiting crimes such as bank theft, smuggling drugs, etc; which is tempting young kids to do the same.
However, if parents put an extra effort to control their children, the effects of crime can be controlled. First thing first, education is a very big aspect in everyones life to reduce the crime figure, especially for youngsters. Parents or gaurdians who look after their kids should send them to school and help encourage them to complete their education. Furthermore, they should control the amount of tv time their children watch and also the content they see in it. For example, when I was in school and college, my parents asked me to follow a timetable which mentioned how I spend my time every week. This allowed me to behave properly.
On the whole, all the bad influence and crimes happening in the world can be reduced by allowing teenagers to complete their education and by moderating thier tv schedule and content. Parents supervision over them is basically the best solution to reduce the crime.
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- youth nowadays are involved in many crimes. what are the causes of this? in your opinion, how can we reduce youth crime rate? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...cation plays a very important role in a persons life. Without it, they will not have a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97169811321 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6748125258 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3383869207 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130690514895 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426596038628 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298682871698 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089372052354 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197546841086 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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