youth nowadays are involved in many crimes. what are the causes of this? in your opinion, how can we reduce youth crime rate?
In the meantime, crimes have been increased among youth; there are many reasons which affect adolescents' behaviour. Such as unemployment, lack of parents' supervision, and the wrong use of media. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem; moreover, how can we decrease youngster crime percentage.
For the most part, when we think about youth's illegal acts, we think about guardians’ attention towards their teenagers. Not only does it affect moral ethic but also leads to an increase in crimes' rate on society. The family should look after their members especially during adolescence; they ought to set the foundations of positive behaviour from the beginning which assists youth to understand the impact of crimes on community members. In 2017, research has been published by the Egyptian Gazette showed, most fathers and mothers spend almost 12 hours of work every day which gives youth a space to be involved in illegal actions.
From my point of view, there are diverse ways to control and ban increasing crimes between the new generations. Such as the effective role of celebrities and social media influencers to instil the positive ethic in youth's minds. Moreover, parents have to monitor their dependents. Besides, holding school campaigns to raise awareness about crimes’ drawbacks. A study has been done by Finland’s government said that a percentage of crimes among teenagers decreased by 40% after conducting awareness campaigns through schools and media showing the demerits of crimes.
In conclusion, In the modern era, the rate of crime among youth has raised due to various issues; to avoid that guardians, educationalist, and celebrities ought to present and provide extra activities to raise awareness of the disadvantages of illegal actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39642857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89015747046 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0439813463 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259352483535 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786698543098 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634299101912 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153147629647 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692512733608 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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