The increase in the number of privately-owned cars is having a negative impact on both our towns and the environment. What can individuals and the government do to reduce this problem?
It is an undeniable fact that nowadays means of transportation such as cars are readily accessible almost to everyone. This essay will explain <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-725B0A89139AAD904D0E7DDEFD4580F3" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_97" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in detail " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in detail </pwa>how the ascending number of private cars is causing air pollution and traffic jams and how people and the government can mitigate these issues by raising the taxes for fuel and passing a law to use public vehicles to commute are potential solutions.
As a starting point of discussion, one consequence of this phenomenon would definitely be air pollution. This is because these cars consume a significant amount of fuel and as a result, emit toxic gases in the air, which pollutes our towns and environment. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-457E786ABD07AA80E2828FF344BBB777" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: People" data-pwa-suggestions="People" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Consequently, people" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Consequently, people</pwa> breathe these toxins via air and suffer from a variety of respiratory ailments. Take smog as an example, which is one of the most threatening air problems nowadays, as <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AF837B3703EF634E151DE591943AB39E" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3062" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: many" data-pwa-suggestions="many" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="numerous" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">numerous</pwa> cases of respiration issues have <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2EFC64A87B029AA142CBBDFA2000F451" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="been reported" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">been reported</pwa> worldwide. To combat this matter, both individuals and governments should play their role by stopping unnecessary use of cars and by applying higher taxes to the fuel, respectively.
Not only there is an issue of air pollution, but traffic congestion is also a paramount problem to take into account. Since most of the people <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-221769668E92B63FC8AE00C4BECCF343" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3075" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: can" data-pwa-suggestions="can" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are able to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are able to</pwa> afford their own cars nowadays, higher traffic jams are <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B6612F495B7DE87EA6528FB449677D7B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2963" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: clear" data-pwa-suggestions="clear" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="evident" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">evident</pwa> on the roads. For this reason, people <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F76B672B99D0DCFCA922051E8A757E12" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3079" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: cannot" data-pwa-suggestions="cannot" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are unable to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are unable to</pwa> reach their destinations on time. To tackle this issue, governments should enforce a law of using public transport for the travelling purpose despite the profession, position, and age. Once masses will abide by this law, there will be evidently <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6C4A616CD21FD8435356FC0674432E0A" data-pwa-rule-id="FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="less traffic" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="fewer traffic" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">fewer traffic</pwa> jams and thus, they will reach their destinations on time.
In conclusion, air pollution and traffic congestion are the two significant problems because of private cars; however, these problems can <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-85D037B788C108C29005BC09A2B6979C" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be resolved" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-85D037B788C108C29005BC09A2B6979C" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be resolved" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> resolved</pwa> via not using cars unnecessarily, by applying higher taxes on fuel, and a law-enforcement to use public means of transport.
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| 2020-01-07 | Bisma Humanyun | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 2042, Rule ID: FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'less traffic'?
Suggestion: less traffic
...lass='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>fewer traffic jams and thus, they will reach th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5419.0 1615.20841683 335% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 497.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.9034205231 5.12529762239 213% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.9483900884 2.80592935109 461% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490945674044 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1485.0 506.74238477 293% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.0 1.60771543086 187% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.466530993 49.4020404114 473% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.6875 106.682146367 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.0625 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223507626251 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359503908433 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467830842109 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023502748651 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121589477171 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.4 13.0946893788 347% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -78.43 50.2224549098 -156% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.9 11.3001002004 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 46.53 12.4159519038 375% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 78.4519038076 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 47.0 10.7795591182 436% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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