The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999)
White a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
The bar graph illustrates the quantities of workers arrived to United States from European Union in 1999.
Overall,there are four columns for countries,namely France,Italy,Germany and Britain,apart from that one column for leftover countries in European Union from which employees came in United States.
Look at the graph,we can compare two the highest columns of British and Germans visitors who was looking for working place and there were 25000 and more workers who arrived in America. To contrast ,there are another couple of columns which represent the number of workers from France and Italy and these amount didn't transcend 7000. The last one column is in the middle of the chart which shows average from other countries and in 1999 it was 20000 employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...all,there are four columns for countries,namely France,Italy,Germany and Britain,apart ...
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...four columns for countries,namely France,Italy,Germany and Britain,apart from that one...
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...,namely France,Italy,Germany and Britain,apart from that one column for leftover count...
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...hich employees came in United States. Look at the graph,we can compare two the...
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...ited States. Look at the graph,we can compare two the highest columns of...
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...kers who arrived in America. To contrast ,there are another couple of columns whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25203252033 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92163043242 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4522858458 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222795926342 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129612812899 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904426886746 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182114519077 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732892987431 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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