you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit
write a letter to your friend
In letter explain
the important event
apologize for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear James,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to inform you about the change in dates for my visit to Canada.
this is due to an important upcoming event in the family. my brother is getting married around the same dates as of my visit to canada. this was a quick decision made by both the families and i dont have much say in it. in consideration with the arrangements and prepations that are to be made, i will have to postpone my visit.
i'd like to aplogise to you for the inconvenience this may cause as you must have also made arrangements for my visit and will now have to delay them.
i will now be visiting around end of next month but have not changed my tickets yet. i will be sending you all the updated details soon. i will make sure you have plenty of time to make the arrangements.
yours faithfully,
sumit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, Hope this letter finds you in good healt...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in dates for my visit to Canada. this is due to an important upcoming eve...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...dates for my visit to Canada. this is due to an important upcoming event i...
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Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...important upcoming event in the family. my brother is getting married around the s...
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Line 11, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...he same dates as of my visit to canada. this was a quick decision made by both the f...
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Line 11, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ecision made by both the families and i dont have much say in it. in consideration w...
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Line 11, column 296, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nts and prepations that are to be made, i will have to postpone my visit. i...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Id
...i will have to postpone my visit. id like to aplogise to you for the inconve...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... and will now have to delay them. i will now be visiting around end of next...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and will now have to delay them. i will now be visiting around end of next...
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Line 19, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: I
...th but have not changed my tickets yet. i will be sending you all the updated det...
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Line 19, column 86, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...th but have not changed my tickets yet. i will be sending you all the updated det...
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Line 19, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...nding you all the updated details soon. i will make sure you have plenty of time ...
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Line 19, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nding you all the updated details soon. i will make sure you have plenty of time ...
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Line 19, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nding you all the updated details soon. i will make sure you have plenty of time ...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...of time to make the arrangements. yours faithfully, sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44171779141 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44453701659 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9558469891 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8181818182 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383804954747 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13801573675 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729749230143 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235355582894 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369625151232 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.