Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we jus watch television. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Electronic devices are commonly used in our houses. T.V is disturbing our personal lives as well as effecting our social contacts. I partially agree with the above statement that the advanced technologies greatly showing harmful aspects on humans life. This essay will discuss how T.V is used as a source of entertainment while the health problems as a major drawbacks.
Firstly, television is the essential household item since decades. With the passage of time, the traditional T.V replaced with the latest smart T.V having advance features of youtube, google, and messaging apps. Moreover, by spending leisure time, most of the children and adults watch movies and dramas, playing games on smart T.V and much more. For instance, the modern era utitize the advanced techniques as a source of entertainment by watching the programes of their own choice by just one click while in ancient time people used to wait for a specific program. So, television is the way of ammusement to some extent.
Secondly, consuming plenty of time on the extra activities decline the social interaction among the families and the communities. For example, people spend holidays at home and didn't go outside that overcome face to face interaction among the society. On the contrary, it may leads to health issues because of utilizing much time on gamings. It not only effects the backbone but also badly effect the eyesight. Hence, family lives become distorted easily.
To sum up all, electronic media interrupted our families and social relationships. This essay has discussed the role of latest device as a source of joy and its demerits related to health. Therefore, it is recomended that fam.jam should b promoted instead of serving time in extra activities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75755991004 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0682424665 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8235294118 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163533315612 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458883198161 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029374233835 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906317076794 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159542083229 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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