Children learn best by observing the behavior of adults and copying it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The importance of children learn best by observing the behavior adults and copying which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion, The substantial influnce of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impect in recent years. I will agree this essay and give my opinion in upcoming paragraps.
There are myriod of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preoinderant one stems from the fact that children are the next generation, mostly childrerns are follow by adults activity like gaming and many other kind of activity, it is effect their communication skill.
Elaborating my viewpoint there are some more demerits but one of the cruclal effects is thatit has been that generaly seen that upcoming generation of an education faimly has better standerd. For example, life style and education system are mostly change compare to other faimly
To conclution, according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conlusion that benefit perents should be thier children away from bad community
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a conlusion that benefit perents should be thier children away from bad communit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 181.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36464088398 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71813097777 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3136645942 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.2 104.977214359 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2 20.9669160288 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176688100669 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842326977806 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846207995499 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892480290873 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10169526218 0.0609392437508 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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