You have participated in a party at your friend’s home last week. You may have forgotten your watch there. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Thank him/her for the party.
– Ask to look for the watch.
– Suggest what he/she should do about it.
Dear Mathew
How are you doing? Hope you just fit as a fiddle and I believe everything is fine after the part. I am really sorry for leaving your house during the party as I was somewhat busy with my business. I am sure others were there to clean the mess ups at the end and I am really thankful to you giving us a right time and place with wonderful reception for the mass gathering of all friends.
As you know, I was really hurried to leave the party as I had to attend some important business meetings. During the time, I forgot my watch somewhere in your bedroom. I feel that I either kept that in front of the shelf or on the bathroom window while I was washing up for leaving your house.
If you find the watch, you can keep it with you as my gift until we meet each other. Or as our friend Mr Hisham’s marriage falls next month you can bring it over there. Moreover, since it has some technical issues with Bluetooth connectivity, if possible, you can get it repaired from the nearest shop in your office. Let me know the payment details and I will pay you online.
Convey my regards to your sweetie and little boy.
Lovely
Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-11 | yasamanbolourian | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | AFSAL | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, while, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35779816514 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29021772197 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6566812677 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259876439709 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862433681598 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387013876536 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146840799951 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383674370213 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.