TPO 34- A huge marine mammal known as Steller’s sea cow once lived in the waters around Bering Island off the coast of Siberia. It was described in 1741 by Georg W. Steller, a naturalist who was among the first European to see one. In 1768 the animal became extinct. The reasons for the extinction are not clear. Here are three theories about the main cause of the extinction.
The reading passage and the lecture both discuss the disaster that happend and many see cows exticted during the time. In the reading part, the author mentions that there were several reasons and discribed tree mains of them. In the listening part, however, the speaker challenges what the author states and refutes the reasons.
To behin with, as mentioned in the article, the writer sets forth that there were extinxted, resulting in over hunted by native people, which they were a good sorce for foods; nevertheless, the speaker rebutes the reasons asserting that sea cows had huge massive wei, sometimes over the ten tones, therefore, they could beer the vilage and there is no reason for them to hinted many of them to be extinction.
Secondly, the author points out that its main sorce foods were declined by ecological changes on that time. Nonetheless, the speaker flatly contradicts the rasons and cintends that echological changes would affected on many species not only the cow seas animals, but also others like fishes. there were growing the fishes on that time, in hence does not lack of food storage.
Finally, the author claims that it might have been happent because of the advent of uropians and for fur tradors. they had weapons that took lots of them. IN contrasts the professor is off the opinion that before uropian arrived on the Sibery there were almost near extinction. they were quit small and were not largest on that time and it has other reasons that do not realete to the uropians and their weaponens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eaker rebutes the reasons asserting that sea cows had huge massive wei, sometimes...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...cintends that echological changes would affected on many species not only the cow seas a...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...s animals, but also others like fishes. there were growing the fishes on that time, i...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...advent of uropians and for fur tradors. they had weapons that took lots of them. IN ...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...bery there were almost near extinction. they were quit small and were not largest on...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the largest'.
Suggestion: not the largest
...tinction. they were quit small and were not largest on that time and it has other reasons t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90421455939 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29588569982 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.7808204815 49.2860985944 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211859831916 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067710524777 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428219443402 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118398570608 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032941452311 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.