In many places homes need to be build but there is no space. Some say that it is important to protect countryside and not build homes.
What is your opinion
Give reason and ex
A rapid increase in the population of the world is witnessed in this century. This raises the issue of providing homes to the people, but due to limited land resources, housing is a common problem in many countries. Putting countryside land for housing purposes is definitely not a viable option, as it will further cause a dearth in the production of crops and other basic needs. Moreover, it will cause the exploitation of the pristine countryside as well.
As we all know cities are the preferred location for housing, but overcrowding of the cities has forced the people to move to countryside areas. Using the countryside land for housing will mean less arable land for the purpose of agriculture, this in return will increase the demand for both cash and commercial crops. To illustrate, the land which was earlier being used for agriculture will now be used for housing and the government will have to import crops which were earlier being grown in our own country.
Not only the agricultural cycle but the ecological pattern will also get disturbed. More housing facilities in the countryside will definitely attract more population, which in turn will put pressure on the resources available in the countryside. It will also increase the waste and the undisturbed nature of the countryside will start perishing. A survey conducted by the MCD of India shows that some villages which have witnessed population increase have started facing the problem of scarcity of resources and waste disposal as well.
Hence, it is important to understand that shifting the excess population to the countryside will not provide a permanent solution. It will further harm the countryside environment and create the same problem that people in the cities are already facing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15172413793 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8279247064 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503448275862 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5185523056 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771924477723 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320156758204 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213035207353 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537382792892 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011984952673 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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