You have recently started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend.
In your letter:
Explain the reasons why you changed jobs
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news
Dear Dave,
I hope this letter find you well. I am feeling on the top of the world while writing this letter to you. You will be very happy to know that i have finally made a decision to change my current job.
In my previous job at WIPRO Limited, I used to work half heartedly from 9.00 am to 5.00 pm from monday to friday, with same old boring routine. Being at the desk job as financial analyst, previous company paid less dollars as well as less interesting job didn't give me job satisfaction at all. I felt imprisoned in that tedious work culture.
The current job which I have recently joined is way opposite of what I have been studying my whole life. Rather it is related to my never dying passion for photography. My new employer company, East-West Photography, is a famous wedding photography company in which I am being highly paid, almost double the salary i use to get, and along with that I get to travel different cities and countries, free of cost. I'm now very happy with what all I'm doing.
There is one more good news I want to surprise you with. I recently proposed my girlfriend for marriage. And guess what, she said Yes. So, we are getting married next month on 13th. You, along with your parents, are cordially invited to be the part of my happy occasion.
Please write to me about your travel plans for wedding.
Warm regards
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer dollars'?
Suggestion: fewer dollars
...inancial analyst, previous company paid less dollars as well as less interesting job didnt g...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun dollars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...inancial analyst, previous company paid less dollars as well as less interesting job...
^^^^
Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...dollars as well as less interesting job didnt give me job satisfaction at all. I felt...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...hat I have been studying my whole life. Rather it is related to my never dying passion...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 316, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g highly paid, almost double the salary i use to get, and along with that I get t...
^
Line 13, column 318, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...highly paid, almost double the salary i use to get, and along with that I get to tr...
^^^
Line 13, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ent cities and countries, free of cost. Im now very happy with what all Im doing. ...
^^
Line 13, column 444, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...f cost. Im now very happy with what all Im doing. There is one more good news...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.564 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3797445241 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5707015934 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1176470588 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169648431939 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537368469167 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469579008328 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101632065374 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550596191103 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.