Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Although advancements in science and technology have had a beneficial impact on society. However, the same advancements, bring a multitude of new dilemmas and ethical qualms that— if left unaddressed— will cause more harm than good.
Authors, such as George Orwell, have warned about the potential danger of technological advancements as they can be used as a vehicle for malicious actions. For example, in Orwell's 1984, Orwell warns about the government's ability to use concealed microphones and telescreen— which resemble hidden cameras that are easily purchased today— as a means of surveillance and control over their citizens. Orwell highlights the use of technology as a tool that maintains the power of a totalitarian government and subdue it's citizens so that they live in a constant state of fear. In addition, the novel Fahrenheit 451 highlights the use of technology in a dystopian society that fosters a culture of escapism that can also be seen in society today. In the novel, Mildred relies upon her seashell ear-thimbles and parlor wall family to escape the world she lives in. As a result, she remains isolated in a manufactured world— unable to form authentic connections with individuals around her. Thus, these novels illustrate that advancements in science and technology do not solve societal problems, but instead, further propagate and create new problems for society.
However, developments in science and technology can help increase the quality of life in some cases. Advancements in medical care, such as new treatments that utilize sterilized Tilapia skin for healing the skin of burn victims, have greatly improved the healing time for these patients. Yet, these developments cannot solve the issue of helping all individuals access the healthcare they need. Moreover, new technology that is being developed can be used to further exploit individuals by controlling access to this technology. For example, although insulin is able to be made on a large scale through the use of microbes, there are many individuals living in the United States who are unable to purchase the Insulin they need to survive due to the inflated pricing of the drug. Thus, advancements in technology can offer new methods of treatment and increase the quality of life, but only to those who can afford to pay a premium to access them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...in Orwells 1984, Orwell warns about the governments ability to use concealed microphones an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24603174603 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95183686743 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9895640336 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187839708721 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634452342723 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526868987277 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118183294442 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171642418535 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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