Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford.
What are the reasons for this behavior?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
consumerism lifestyle grows among the people. They purchase unnecessary and overpriced goods using a loan from financial help companies. this essay will address reasons causing this issue and propose solutions that the government ought to take to prevent consumptive habit in the community.
Plenty of reasons explain why people in today world become more materialistic. First of all, people purchase unnecessary luxurious goods as they follow a certain lifestyle. For example, people buy brand-new gadgets because of their social circles own similar products. Thus, they will not feel left behind in the current trend. Secondly, banks provide financial assistance such as credit cards with low interest or even interest-free. This encourages cardholders to get unaffordable items as they could pay an instalment for a certain period.
There are suitable remedies which can be done to deter the public from this way of life. Firstly, the government should educate the people in terms of gravest problems led by consumptive lifestyle. For example, the government have to install the billboards nearby department stores conveying messages to stop purchasing high price unessential items. As a result, this would increase public awareness. Secondly, the government should issue strict policy regarding credit card application requirements. Those who come from low economic class should be forbidden to apply for this mode of financial help as it could make them having the bank loans.
To sum up, I believe that consumerism practices in the community is caused by the way of people live and easy access to economic assistance, and to solve this issue, the government should continuously remind the community regarding the bad consequences resulted by this lifestyle as well as propose a better regulation in terms of credit card ownership.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49824561404 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87521112745 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.2033913548 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240072530173 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705536420294 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465047709341 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13525947337 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366073088141 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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