Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends?
These days, a friend relationship is the most critical issue for a big society which to be honest, can play an essential role in this subject and may some problems would crash the strong relationship. because, some valuable factor is vital. in this essay, we will discuss these factors.
In a strong relationship, reliability can ignore some facts which cause unhappiness to come instead of having good behavior. To put another way, I would prefer to concede the reality from my friend. To illustrate, consider that maybe a small event disturbs my friend. However, it may be important for me. To sum up, anything does not valuable to break my relationship with any of my friends.
It seems that a range of mistakes between friends may exert a negative impact on individuals. by passing the time, when I myself have more knowledge about friends push me to ignore incorrect work and hide it all of the time. Due to, loving my friend is crucial. For Instance, I’m an honest person to friends and I have the majority of erroneous in my job. Mainly, I cannot remember the birthday date of my friend. Besides, I have to lie to my friend about him or her birthday date or entirely forget it. As a result, I can not be completely honest with my friends.
In conclusion, I believe that I’m not always honest with my friends, Due to, Considering my relationship, which is a valuable and sustainable fragment in my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73895582329 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76901150575 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0976799172 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160527664643 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598769963574 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638756396342 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101993691129 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361082108215 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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