Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. You should:
Describe the presentation
Why was it important
How did it help you
Dear Sir,
Trust this letter finds you in good health and cheers as it leaves me at present. I would like to express my gratitude for the book you rendered me which helped me to nail my presentation.
I was not really expecting that my team manager would suggest my name to present about the topic “Architecture of China wall”. As I was completed unaware of the topic, it was your book which benefited me to get an insight about it elaborately.
Indeed, I was extremely cherished that the entire book was about the great wall of China and its physical features. I was surprised to create more than 20 slides on the topic as the sections available on the book made me trouble-free to Jordon the complex and simple points. In addition, I copied the Introductory and Conclusion portions from the book itself.
Needless to mention thanks here. I would like to thank god at this moment for blessing me with such a great mentor like you. With Love, Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Trust this letter finds you in good heal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6783625731 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74003911838 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5672948362 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222179546735 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777624976563 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699608817407 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131709949188 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823730488513 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.