Write a letter to your friend asking him help to make a website.
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits. I came to know that you have learned website designing course; so, thought to ask your help in creating website for my business.
As you know, I run a shop that sells ready-made garments for all age-groups. The in-store selling is debilitating day by day since people started shopping online. I think it's high time for me to get my business take a leap in technology. Therefore, I am planning to have an e-commerce site that can showcase my items and people can watch and buy them.
Admittedly, good design and easy buying on website would certainly prosper my business. Let me know if we can meet this weekend and discuss on the business-requirement. I will also take you to my shop, showing you different varieties and make you aware of the stock that I sale.
It would be great if you could come with your family. This way we can have family time together along with discussing business.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours lovingly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...iscussing business. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, X...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8087431694 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72270467113 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3127085856 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6923076923 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795835550539 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299804646698 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436605946873 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408835948907 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524762953748 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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