Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?
It is common belief that sports which involved violence should not be showed on tv and also they should not be part of international competition. My opinion is that fighting sports have not influence on most of the people and banning them would not solve any problem.
A considerable part of society does not want to see violent sport on tv thinking that could affect the sensibility of some watcher. Although those people do not complain about movies which show even more violence. sports like boxing or martial arts, before teaching how to hit the opponent, they teach discipline and respect. those values can be seen during a match, where the athletes are hitting each other but without hate and following determinated rules.
boxing and martial arts are sports which have invented a long time ago. those sports are part of the anchient sports and they are part of the history of society. banning those sports from international competitions would be a substantial mistake and an insult to the culture of sport. people who think that those violent sports should be banned should try to understand the benefit coming from practising those sports, either mental and physical.
To recapitulate, banning violent sport from tv would not bring any benefit to society because people would watch violence on tv in other forms. Moreover, banning sports like boxing and martial arts would be a terrible mistake as society would loose somenthing that have been practising from the beginning of sport history. To conclude, I truly disagree with banning those sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: influenced
...pinion is that fighting sports have not influence on most of the people and banning them ...
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...affect the sensibility of some watcher. Although those people do not complain about movi...
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Suggestion: Sports
...t movies which show even more violence. sports like boxing or martial arts, before tea...
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Suggestion: Those
...ent, they teach discipline and respect. those values can be seen during a match, wher...
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... and following determinated rules. boxing and martial arts are sports which...
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Suggestion: Boxing
...llowing determinated rules. boxing and martial arts are sports which have ...
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Suggestion: People
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...ports, either mental and physical. To recapitulate, banning violent sport f...
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Suggestion: lose
... be a terrible mistake as society would loose somenthing that have been practising fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53258613842 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5621813359 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412235811484 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150065739524 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748883804372 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261088100679 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502059186069 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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