The gap between rich and poor is ggrowing. What problems does this create?. What can be done to tackle them?
It is undoubtedly true that the disparity between the rich and poor is increasing day by day, as the wealthy people becoming richest and poor people grow poorer. This essay will describe the challenge came along this trend and provide right solution to solve them.
One of the main problems caused by unequal distributions of wealth is inaccessible of education for poverty-stricken people. Nowadays, quality education are becoming very expensive. There are excellent college and university which are very costly and cannot afford by beggarly people, due to this people cannot get better education which are essential for high-paying job and became poorer. Another important issue are the increases in crime rates. Most of people often do not make nought money to fulfill their basic needs and then they start to do heinous act like robbery, murder,and thief. For an instance,recent reports of crime,it was mention that there is increase 50% crime which done only for their basic needs.
Although these problems are serious, it is possible to find its solution.first of all,government should introduce financial schemes and scholarship for the talented, economically poor student that they can get b quality education they deserve. This will surely give them fair chance to compete with the rich . Another solution is high authority should provides employment opportunity for financially weak people,which will automatically increase their income and living standard,but also reduces crime rate. To illustrate, government of Nepal has provided different job opportunity and the sscholarships scheme based on their economic circumstance and talent. Hence effective measures must be applied to reduce the gap between wealthy and destitute people.
In conclusion,this trend of expanding gap between rich and par has become one of the complicated and complex issue,so proper action btaken immensely by increasing education and job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62837837838 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0084095007 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4415852348 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146184681208 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492493935435 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04792325999 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968703729767 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453808726369 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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