You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, you should:express your apologywhy you could not meetmaking arrangement to meet him.

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You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter, you should:

express your apology

why you could not meet

making arrangement to meet him.

Dear Kate,

I am writing this letter to apologies to you for not able to meet you, During my last month's visit at your town. Although I was very exited to meet you but because of my work commitment, I had to cancel my plan. Besides all these, accept my sincere apology and gift as well which I am sending with this.

As you know, I am working as HR Manager in a multinational company however this was a short business trip and planned suddenly as my boss asked me to join him. While I decided to meet you during my free time whereas management decided team Dinner in a restaurant and I could not denied them as this was my first experience.

I am also trying to arrange another trip over there for next month for 4 days so we can spend some quality time together and could make some good memory.

Again, I want to say sorry from bottom of my heart for not being able to meet you. Give my regard to everybody in the house however soon i will meet everyone personally.

With lots of love,

Jessi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
... Dinner in a restaurant and I could not denied them as this was my first experience. ...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to everybody in the house however soon i will meet everyone personally. Wit...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3612565445 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26895555616 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9111346766 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269178298424 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111111902364 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117952975064 0.0603063233224 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151882316044 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792737858056 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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