Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which one do you prefer?
Nowadays, the human need to spend lots of time in their business unless can not afford the expenses of life. However, parents have another task more important than any other aspect of life, even earning money. It is nothing except fulfilling their parent task in kids' life. Since they do not have a bunch of free time, they need to choose what activity is more beneficial for children. Some parents hold an opinion that it is better to spend these times to help infants with their homework, others tend to have some fun time with their beloved kids. Personally, I believe in the latter viewpoint because of its great effects on parents' and children's life. I will mention two reasons in bellow, both of which are more important.
The first reason that juts out of my mind immediately pondering this issue which is about parents life is the fact that these parents always struggle with affairs about working, money, problems, and etc, so they need to have some fun, really crucial matter to culminate themselves even in other aspects of life Including their job, according to surveys. Can they have fun times if they dedicate free time to do the assignment with their children? In my point of view, playing with little angels will help them to have great moments, which are like an engine to accelerate their progress in their working life. As you know anybody needs to be energetic to be a successful person in his or her life, nobody can tolerate the heavy burden of working tasks if they do not have fun times on rest time. There was a great investigation in my country about three years ago, published in all magazines at that time. The research was about this matter, effects of leisure time on the employee's efficiency at office. The results indicated that employees who had good weekends and vacations had notably better performance than those who do not have; in addition, those who do serious matters on the weekend felt depression after a while. What is sweeter than having fun with your beautiful children at these times, giving you huge energy.
Secondly, all children need to feel their parents in their life. It has irreparable consequences in kids' future life when did not have a good relationship with mothers and fathers. On the other hand, these little people do not like their assignment very much because most of them do it mandatorily, if you let them on their own they will not do even one of them. In my opinion, it is not affirmative for them to devote their leisure time to solve maths or physics problems while they hate them already. Nevertheless, it will be a great moment if boys play for instance football with their fathers or girls play with their mothers. I remember when I was a child my father used to play football with me on weekends. He was my best friend that I loved to play with him all day and night. In addition, it was not only joyful for me but also it helps me to improve my performance at school because it gave me great energy. However, my uncle always forces my cousin to practice his math problems with him, since he thought it would help my cousin to reach great positions in his courses, but it had reverse results. Kids prefer to have a great friendship with their parents, not other types of relationships like student and teacher ones.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments it is crystal clear that weekends and free times are not for studying or doing serious activities, on the contrary, it is about to feel free and do something which is in counterpoint with your regular weekly life. As you see playing with children on leisure times not only are useful for little kids but they are helpful for parents life as it gave them a lot of energy which is like propulsion for them.
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...good weekends and vacations had notably better performance than those who do not have;...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, you know, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 97.0 43.0788530466 225% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3109.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 670.0 407.700716846 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64029850746 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08766726615 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41950564663 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458208955224 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 958.5 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5383951166 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.148148148 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8148148148 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380649203527 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111344385271 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742038244749 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250891230516 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619929833813 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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