You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include:
Where you are going
What the favor is?
Why you need this friend to help?
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write back. Anyways, I’m writing if you could do me a favor.
Actually, my wife and I are going to Shimla for four days to celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary on 28th January. I booked air tickets and planned a surprise dinner at The Taj Hotel. After that, we will go for a long drive for sightseeing. How does this sound?
By the way, to our surprise, we came to know that our son Vibhu can’t come with us because he has a mid-term exam during this trip. So, I thought, I’d ask you if you could take care of my son. I can assure you he is a decent friendly boy friendly and he will not bother you much. Like you, he also loves to play cricket, so, I’m sure you both would enjoy playing cricket in the garden.
I’d really appreciate your help in this situation. I can’t wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, if, really, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53631284916 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31811938341 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715083798883 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7008706119 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353712966626 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120082701571 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097706977149 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192894214827 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938283030696 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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