A friend from another country is planning to visit your country in October or November for a week.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• recommend a city or town they could visit and give reasons for your recommendations
• say what clothes they may need to bring at that time of year
• suggest meeting your friend while they are in your country.
Hi Joban,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. I am extremely delighted to know that you are visiting India this year. Owing to this, I want to suggest some important things regarding your visit.
Firstly, in the list of your various places that you are going to visit in India, I want you to include Amritsar also. As you might know, I hail from this city and for your information, this is one of the best cities in my country. this is the sacred place where the religious Sikh temple that is Golden temple situated. There are a number of other places such as Sada Pind, Haveli, jallianwala bagh where you can visit and can gather knowledge about the culture of Indian people.
Secondly, the months in which you are visiting are usually cold months, therefore I suggest you bring some warm clothes with you. Moreover, if you are also planning to go to Himachal then do not forget to bring the wind sheet as it might be extreme cold in that region.
Lastly, if you will come to Amritsar I urge you to stay at my place with my family. Everyone in my family is very excited to meet you.
I can't wait to see you.
Yours lovingly.
Prabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hi Joban, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
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...rtant things regarding your visit. Firstly, in the list of your various pl...
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...n India, I want you to include Amritsar also. As you might know, I hail from this c...
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...lude Amritsar also. As you might know, I hail from this city and for your informa...
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...s one of the best cities in my country. this is the sacred place where the religious...
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...bout the culture of Indian people. Secondly, the months in which you are vi...
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...ht be extreme cold in that region. Lastly, if you will come to Amritsar I u...
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...ily is very excited to meet you. I cant wait to see you. Yours lovi...
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... you. I cant wait to see you. Yours lovingly. Prabh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64814814815 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19700194772 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5133827427 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144213049224 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713120599748 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746726781467 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697240888617 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072167351045 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.