Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether only managers should be involved in the organization's decision making or whether the contribution of employees is also important. I believe that the opinion of employees plays an important role in the company's decision-making process.
The idea of taking decisions by the supervisors of a company is advocated by people on the grounds of confidentiality and experience. At times, there has been some information which a company can not share with all of its staff because it may contain confidential information like an organization's future roadmap and many more. Moreover, sharing such confidential information with each member of the company may reveal its secrets to its competitors. On the other hand, managers are fairly experienced as far as the market condition and the latest technologies are concerned. Furthermore, they can better guide the associates about the technology and the skills which are beneficial for them and the company as well.
However, the above arguments can be rejected because having a transparent relationship with employees can help to build a strong bonding between employee and employer. By doing so, the employees will feel that their opinions are being valued and they find themselves as a part of a team which in turn helps in building a better workplace to work for. Moreover, an employee knows better than his manager about the improving areas and the training required to overcome those gaps. For example, if a manager nominates his employee for training on the financial matter and the employee finds that training as a waste of time, then it is a loss for both employee and employer. Furthermore, it is better to ask an employee about their interest as far as training is concerned.
To conclude, if the employees were given equal opportunity to share their opinions, they feel safe at the workplace, which in turn helps in building a strong employee and employer relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an organization' or simply 'organizations'?
Suggestion: an organization; organizations
...y contain confidential information like an organizations future roadmap and many more. Moreover,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18553459119 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02386411777 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9088754417 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243303411945 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916563932209 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566649804947 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147173836529 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860160556449 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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