'Young people enjoy life more than older people.' Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although, one's age has no bearing on how much one can enjoy life, I disagree with the statement, “Young people enjoy life more than older people do.”
Old people have much more time on their hands. Even though, most people in their post-retirement life do take up small projects or minor jobs, they are not very busy. They do not need to apply for a leave. They don’t need to decide whether to attend a colleague’s daughter’s wedding or to go on a leisure trip across Eastern Europe, they can quite easily manage both. Time is not a constraint for them.
Young people have a lot of stress in their lives. They need to make themselves financially secure, and for that they need to put a lot of effort and time into their jobs. They have a lot of expenses to deal with too, lots of loans on their heads. The stress of paying the monthly rent alone can take a toll on an individual. In such a scenario, even if one manages to escape to the shores of the Pacific physically, can one escape these stresses mentally? I don’t think so. Older people can not only afford to carry themselves to such beautiful locations physically, but they can also keep themselves free from the hassles of life mentally.
Coming to the most important point - Children. This is the biggest advantage that older people have over younger ones. Their kids are all grown up and settled. Unlike their younger counterparts, they don’t have to attend school functions. They don’t have to drive their kids to some sort of practice everyday. They don’t have to fit their holiday plans to match with their kid’s vacations. Older people don’t have to budget their holidays so that they can finance their children’s college education.
As one gets older, one truly discovers oneself. We understand what we would enjoy the most and we crave for it. I don’t think there can be any better feeling than that of crossing something off of one’s bucket list, and let’s be honest, we all have one, we just don’t know it yet, because we’re young and stupid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ee from the hassles of life mentally. Coming to the most important point - Chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68927851024 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547222222222 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0801234745 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.45110844103 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143018039825 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046269396167 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780739106673 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124496599649 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130196016001 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.