All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human rights should be provided equally to coutrymen. Employees in different companies ought to have an equal treatment and own the same number of vacations during the year. I totally agree with this; my opinion will be manifisted in the following lines.
On one hand, workers of various levels should have the same rights specially when it comes to the number of day's vacation. In other words, principals, directors and cafeteria man should be nearly equal to avoid the negative feelings among them. For example, a study has been published in The New York Times shows that the reason behind the successful of 75% of known companies is due to the equality between their team mambers. Hence, this ensures that team worker equality is the key to a successful buisness.
On the other hand, the unfair distribution among worker's rights may lead to a quick failure of businesses. To illustrate, the honest compitition spirit requires a safety feeling between stuff members. this is examplified by the country of Japan, wage earners are getting rights equality, which helps Japan to be a leader in industry business. Thus, taking such countries as a prime example confirm the importance of equality.
In conclusion, nowadays the power of equality mostly responsible of the successful of many businesses. I believe that all workers shuld gain the same number of vacation days. I suggest that governments should impose taxes on compnies if they break this role
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...a safety feeling between stuff members. this is examplified by the country of Japan,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07916666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67362373734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7461230157 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0714285714 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246452210234 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796905384544 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742760654995 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156758514708 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111624060573 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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