Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than the benefits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer, and required examples.
Experts throughout both the developed and developing world would have debated on the benefits and drawbacks of modern inventions. Some believe that modern infections have negative benefits on people’s lives, personally, I believe otherwise. This essay will argue both the sides using examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the other hand, modern inventions have several benefits but they do have negative effects which cannot be overlooked. Today, thanks to inventions people are able to connect across the world, but at the same time, people are becoming secluded from their near and dear ones. For instance, earlier family and friends bonded with each other by meeting regularly, however, since the invention of phones, family and friends now prefer to talk or message instead of meeting personally. Additionally, the modern inventions also affects the health of people. For example, an extensive study by WHO showed that around 40% of people suffer from neck pain as they spend most of the time bending their neck while using their smart phones. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that the modern inventions not only affects the relationships but also their well-being.
On the one hand, there is ample evidence that states that modern inventions have been beneficial for people. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, modern inventions like WhatsApp, Skype and Facebook have helped break communication barriers among people. Today, people can communicate freely with their relatives, friends, and can also connect with like-minded people across the globe which earlier was not possible. Secondly, the modern inventions have helped in saving time for doing an activity. For example, recent empirical research by Hindustan Times demonstrated that 90% of people have voted that the modern kitchen applies like microwave, coffee maker and food processor have helped in reducing their cooking time. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that modern inventions are considered boon as they help in reducing the time taken to complete any work.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that modern inventions have helped humanity but at the same time have affected the relationship building skills and health. I believe that a balance needs to be maintain to lead a healthy and happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39673913043 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61182867796 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8280540596 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.823529412 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215505973461 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820879808404 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493668017483 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139909355034 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187620851277 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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