It is sometimes said that the countryside offers a high quality of life, especially for families. What are the arguments for and against families choosing to live and work in the countryside, for example as farmers? What is your own view about this?
Everyone in our modern culture seems to BE seekING FOR the PROSPEROUS private life and one of the options TARGETING this is LOCATION. This essay will discuss pros and cons of the countryside’s habitat for the families and working as farmers and explain why people do not have to HESITATE moving to the villages.
On the one hand, perhaps the major factors which remaiN individuals in the cities are their career prospects and education for —— children. They are likely to reckon that in the megapolices they would obtain sheer salary and then they would afford excellent universitY DEGREES for their descents improving their future IN this way. Moreover, city dwellers tend to consider that country life REQUIRES OME TO BE hard-working WHICH IS TEDIOUS comparED TO the ENTERTAINING opportunities in urban areas rangING from all-night-long restaurants and cinemas to the shopping centers.
On the other hand, it is possible to say that rural life is full of —— obvious advantages and —— great examples of THESE might be silence, fresh air, peace and tranquility. Without a doubt being a farmer demands the certain efforts and concessions SUCH AS waking up early and severe weather conditionS of the workplace depending on the season. Despite of this, there IS MUCH profiT for such lifestyle, for instance, non-GMO products, physical activity and THE environment. Besides, currently the Internet offers the favorable circumstances for the distance learning what could be appropriate for students to achieve A prestigious uni degree around the world, that is why parents may feel freedomly in choosing a location for ONE’s residence.
It is logical to conclude that, either life in the city or out of it has its BENEFITS and DRAWBACKS, however in closer inspection —— living in the village appears to be outweighed with benefits.
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...e seems to BE seekING FOR the PROSPEROUS private life and one of the options TARG...
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...e to HESITATE moving to the villages. On the one hand, perhaps the major facto...
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... sheer salary and then they would afford excellent universitY DEGREES for their d...
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...try life REQUIRES OME TO BE hard-working WHICH IS TEDIOUS comparED TO the ENTERT...
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...ING opportunities in urban areas rangING from all-night-long restaurants and cine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26845637584 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87146378448 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640939597315 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0823093769 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271002133366 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948080325852 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667519524167 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142380914482 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797791597393 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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