Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country .
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Many individuals believes that travellers from the overseas should pay more money than localities when they visit traditional and tourist attraction in the new nation .In my perspective i do not agree with this statement . My implications have been justified in the fourth coming paragraph.
To begin with, tourism is one of the most effective factor affecting economy of the country.Toursit provides income to many citizens by accommodation,transportation,shopping,visiting markets and my more. Furthermore , increase in the tourist provides more job opportunities for the members of the society.When tourist are charged more ,they avoid visiting such a place leading ti reduction in he financial benefits.
In addition to the less payment,when foreigners are not paying extra for food or for any shopping than why should they pay for the cultural places. Moreover , they spend a lot on flight tickets and taxes , charging for extras will discourage them to visit historical ruins.
However, there are many countries who are developing country and have low economical price. By fining more money a good source for maintainance and repairing would be collected.But that can also be done by collecting equal amount too and it is government's duty to spend good amount for the prologation. Thus, charging more is not necessary.
To conclude, I pen down that foreigners should not be charged more than the regional when they visit archaeological remains.
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- Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country To what extent do you agree with this view 56
- Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country To what extent do you agree with this view 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46460176991 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02572305614 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650442477876 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9975396345 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329800405447 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123993239178 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094392760965 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183999201545 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669549327571 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.