Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country .
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Many individuals believe that, travellers from the overseas should pay more money than localities when they visit traditional and tourist attraction in the new nation. In my perspective I do not agree with this statement. My implications have been justified in the fourth coming paragraph.
To begin with, tourism is one of the most effective factor affecting economy of the country. Toursit provides income to many citizens by accommodation,transportation,shopping,visiting markets and my more. Furthermore, increase in the tourist provides more job opportunities for the members of the society. When tourist are charged more, they avoid visiting such a place leading ti reduction in he financial benefits.
In addition to the less payment, when foreigners are not paying extra for food or for any shopping than why should they pay for the cultural places. Moreover, they spend a lot on flight tickets and taxes,charging for extras will discourage them to visit historical ruins.
However, there are many countries who are developing country and have low economical price. By fining more money a good source for maintainance and repairing would be collected. But that can also be done by collecting equal amount too and it is government's duty to spend good amount for the prologation. Thus, charging more is not necessary.
To conclude, I pen down that foreigners should not be charged more than the regional when they visit archaeological remains.
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- Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country To what extent do you agree with this view 56
- Some people think that foregin visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attraction in a country To what extent do you agree with this view 56
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Suggestion: , transportation
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , charging
... spend a lot on flight tickets and taxes,charging for extras will discourage them to visi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39301310044 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94468435951 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0827324764 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330359616762 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1057613994 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778781384822 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184230340482 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666864852133 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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