the average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that people in the future would suffer from a poorer health than we are today. I am completely disagree with this opinion because I believe people would instead lead a healthier life in the future.
The first and most obvious reason for a higher healthy standard in the future would be the technological advancement and progression. Nowadays the easier access to air travel as well as the factories operation increases the burning of fossil fuel which emits pollutants and green house gases to the air, and eventually make people more vulnerable to respiratory illnesses and epidemic diseases. However, a great amount of funding has been allocated to researching alternative energies which are cleaner and more sustainable, so it is predictable that in the future we will have less dependence on fossil fuel, and air pollution and global warming would be reduced accordingly. What's more, medical innovations in the future allows more success in tackling chronicle diseases, which would be linked to people's higher average standard of health in the future.
Apart from technological development, health awareness among people is also closely related to people's health in the future, and the trend is seen to continue in the future. We can easily find evidence in the increasing number of gyms in the last few years as well as the popularity of fitness related topics in social media; both encourages people to lead a healthy lifestyle. If people can exercise regularly and keep a balanced diet, higher chances are that their immune systems would be improved, consequently reducing their risks of catching illnesses. Also, people have paid more attention on their mental health. Working from home and other revolutionized communication technology allow workers to reach a balance between work and life, therefore enhancing their quality of life and of course psychological health as well.
To conclude, technological advancement, together with health awareness would serve as two pillars of a better health in future life.
- It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays What problems does this cause What solutions are there to these problems 84
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be used to solve these problems? 73
- Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- In recent years pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age Do you think this is a positive or negative development 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...alth than we are today. I am completely disagree with this opinion because I believe peo...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
...ier access to air travel as well as the factories operation increases the burning of foss...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...l warming would be reduced accordingly. Whats more, medical innovations in the future...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...among people is also closely related to peoples health in the future, and the trend is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29538461538 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8578040148 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.148344038 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226732969376 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934567937914 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585577790176 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141019825655 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261078294572 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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