it has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The world is changing fast, so are the preferences and habits of the people. While some people believe that changing has a positive effect which provides new experiences, instructive lessons, and awareness of their life, others, however, think that changing the way they live has a detrimental effect which they should avoid on their life. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why people think that changing is a kind of process that people should avoid. The main reason of this is that they want to protect themselves from danger which includes new ideas, habits, or people. they think that every new thing comes to their life has a potential to harm them. According to my experiences, one of my friends defined herself as a “conservative”. she denies everything new in her life and tries to live a basic life. When I asked the reason why she preferred to be a conservative person, she answered she wanted to protect herself from new things which would transform her life into miserable situations. another reason is that changing may cause new difficulties in their life. Taking buying a car as an example, if someone buys another car for a change, driving new car can be more difficult than previous one. As a result, for those who do not want anything new, change can have a negative impact on their life.
Despite these arguments, there are also some people who think that change may provide new advantages in their life. The main advantage is new experiences which can be learnt by changing something. For instance, we can learn how to survive by using our camp experiences in any kind of urgent situation such as earthquake or flood. In addition this, people can be more aware as they prefer to learn and love new things. Helping orphanage may provide you to be more knowledge and sensitive about charities. I strongly believe that we cannot learn everything we need on our own. so, sometimes someone needs to get into our life in order to learn what true one is. Even though some changes cause some bad experiences, we should think it as a lesson that we should never do it again. if we had not tended to do it, how would have we learnt true one? so, it is imperative to act immediately before we regret our mundane life.
In conclusion, it is clear that it is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. In some people’s opinion, doing same thing every day and avoiding change is a better idea due to damages of changes. however, others think that changing is an essential part of our life in terms of new experiences and awareness. I believe that life would be easier if we try to learn and love new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 488.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66393442623 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58540949304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8334433468 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641273027863 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212221145168 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270167913175 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445046017805 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141347362769 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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