Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
people, these days, prefer to wear branded outfits, ride popular vehicles and own many other tagged items. The prime causes of this changing trend seem to be the pressure of maintaining social status and the influence of advertisements. In my opinion, this is considered a negative trend for myriads of reasons.
Of all the numerous components which lead to this transition, one is the social status. this is because, in a world of technology and globalization, people seem to be competing with one another in terms of fashion and modern equipment. Not to mention, these accessories have become a symbol of modernity and wealth. If someone is wearing non-branded clothes and do not own any high-tech piece of equipment, he\she would consider being either impoverished or illiterate. another significant reason for this inclination is celebrity endorsements as the contemporary youths are highly impressionable and often seen stalking their favourite public figure's lifestyle, so for instance, whatever is being advertised by these actors, people would buy those items without giving any second thought.
However, i believe that this trend has several untoward repercussions. The reason for this that people often end up spending far more then what they earn. this results in unnecessary debt and other financial crises. An escalating number of credit card and loan defaulter, these days, is a result of this alternation in the buying behaviour of people.
In conclusion, two of the main causes of this change in the buying pattern of people are community aspects and the influence of celebrity commercialization. I feel that this has negatively impacted the spending habits of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35205992509 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03168656942 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3282399027 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255958606656 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802976666121 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446548925323 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149901826329 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178959897126 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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