More people live alone today than they did in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples to support your view.
There has been a significant increase in the number of people who are living alone in the modern era. In my opinion, while this inclination has caused isolation and other addictions to the new generation, there are a few positives that can not be ignored.
A prime benefit of this trend is, becoming independent and financially responsible. This is because, concerning the former view, a person who lives alone has to deal with day to day household requirements and tasks himself\herself. This makes a person self-sufficient. As for the latter, unlike with family, all the money related decisions are taken by an individual, which plays a vital role in preparing a person to lead a prosperous adult life. For instance, while investing the money on anything, rather than depending on parents or family, an individual does lots of research in the market and other stuff on the internet. As a result, a strong personality and confidence are the few qualities that a person imbibes from such a lifestyle.
On the other hand, there are few untoward repercussions of this transition. Staying alone for the longest time isolates a person from society. As a result, not only they become emotionally detached from their families and loved ones, but they also develop bad habits such as alcohol and smoking. For instance, a growing number of youngsters, who are staying away from their families, often seen partying at the club or pubs and consuming drinks. Consequently, a large portion of modern days is suffering from serious health issues.
In conclusion, although this development has brought few positives to modern society, such as financial expert and self-competent citizens, in my opinion, the negatives of being alienated from the community and lack of emotional attachment should also be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, as for, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15202702703 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99196750008 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7421293034 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132412954417 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447014229219 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373806418651 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878711223391 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287470240027 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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