Modern technology has increased our material wealth, but not our happiness. To what extent do you agree?
Although it is undeniable fact that people in a state-of-the-art world, to some extent, inevitably suffer from negative impacts caused by advanced technology, the high-technological revolution not only has contributed tremendous benefits to human society materialistically and mentally but also promoted human civilization to a new level.( economic and cultural cooperation among countries)
First and foremost, it should be claimed that the achievements of leading-edge technology have played an indispensable role in promoting the rapid growth of human society. Studies show the more Western countries reach toa basic level of modern technology, the more their society grows and the more their wealth increases. By applying the most advanced technological inventions of key industries, leads to innovating as well as manufacturing a large number of high-quality products to serve human life. The most obvious evidence is that automation technologies not only save human labor but also increase productivity, which helps people creating more material wealth.
Secondly, the scientific and technical advancement continuously provides people with remarkable improvement in serving the essential needs of human beings such as medical care services, education activities, and recreational facilities. New technologies including the Internet, television, electronic media, means of modern transportation, etc can not only respond to basic human needs but also be able to permit people to gain expensive luxuries and have a luxurious lifestyle. In addition, economic prosperity is a key factor to allow people to lead a happy and enjoyable life. Therefore, it can be said that the more people live in full-life materialistically and mentally, the happier people will be and the better their future will be.
In conclusion, although technological development in human society has both positive and negative influences, it is a true fact that technology has increasingly changed our lives and we have to research, learn and have knowledge about how to use those technologies in the right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Economic
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... to innovating as well as manufacturing a large number of high-quality products to serve human li...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts to serve human life. The most obvious evidence is that automation technologies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73633440514 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38255718611 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7506554275 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.4 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140257410839 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537669354259 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489159945676 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865994908048 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493139656563 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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